Free the words: villanelle

Timeflight

The birds fly down, the curving wings unfurl.

Though I would catch them, make them stay,

The summer’s gone, the autumn must return.

 

They say that time is hard to trap – to trick,

We scrabble hard to hold it. All the while,

The birds fly down, the curving wings unfurl.

 

Some days I too take flight. I leave

the day behind; misgivings; moments lost.

The summer’s gone, the autumn must return.

 

I launch into tomorrow, waiting for

The updraft; an escape from time?

The birds fly down, the curving wings unfurl.

 

Move on? I must. The pace it gathers fast,

The days move swifter every year.

The summer’s gone, the autumn must return.

 

Or yet – I summon all my strength – I’ll float,

Be in this moment, see it glow, then burn.

The birds fly down, the curving wings unfurl.

The summer’s gone, the autumn must return.

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[The above is a combination of two things – a notion inspired by a picture I love, and a poetry form, the villanelle, that I’ve meant to try before.

The picture is by Braque, with three white bird shapes on a blue background – they all seem to be flying downward, at different angles.

The villanelle is a form favoured by Sylvia Plath, I knew, but I discovered that it’s also the form of Dylan Thomas’ famous ‘Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night’.

For someone waiting for spring, I don’t really want to rush away summer too, but once I had the line about the birds, the repeating line about the summer was one that seemed to fit.]

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